diff --git a/bi_lipschitz_rcd_coordinates_v2.txt b/bi_lipschitz_rcd_coordinates_v2.txt
index 2d140a0..5e1ffad 100644
--- a/bi_lipschitz_rcd_coordinates_v2.txt
+++ b/bi_lipschitz_rcd_coordinates_v2.txt
@@ -1,6 +1,5 @@
 Bi-Lipschitz Coordinates at Regular Points
 of Noncollapsed RCD Spaces
-A Guided Tour for Young Mathematicians
 
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@@ -12,11 +11,7 @@ piece of ordinary flat n-dimensional space. The distortion is a
 constant that depends only on the dimension n, never on the
 particular space or point.
 
-The tour is written for a motivated high-school reader. Every
-technical term is introduced before it is used, the key ideas of
-each argument are explained in plain language, and the precise
-statements are also given so the reader can compare against the
-original. It is honest about what the paper proves from scratch
+The tour is honest about what the paper proves from scratch
 and what it uses as a black box from earlier work.
 
 The original paper has a short introduction and four numbered
@@ -28,9 +23,7 @@ sections:
   Section 4. Renormalization in the space of coordinate values.
 
 The tour follows the paper's own order. A reading guide near the
-end maps each section and each named lemma back to the tour. The
-reader is encouraged to read the tour once for the plot and a
-second time for the estimates.
+end maps each section and each named lemma back to the tour.
 
 
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